I showed the draft of my work to my assessor who was accompanied by his assistant and he gave me feedback about my work
- Make sure you record what you say on the voice recorder and give it three seconds so you can edit the sound.
- First thing was when i did the montage editing of the tour of the hour he said that he want me to talk about the situation about the care, more context about the care home and make sure it give some information led so the audience can understand situation.
- At the beginning of the each segment he wants me to give intro and he want the change of location at the beginning as the location doe not relate to the care system. I said outside the care home which would be the best one.
- He also suggested a new structure that i could follow within my documentary.
This is how it will go.
I will do an intro each segment, once I have done my intro it will go to me asking a question to the Vox pop relating to the segment of the documentary I am doing and I will be showing the viewers about my perception to the question. An example would be what is the Care home like?
Also this weekend i will be sending information to my assessor in regards to when i will be filming and the progress of it.
Next week I will be continuing filming and editing once I have visit a university.